What sense this poem makes to you? Where do you place it from 0-9?

Blessings i love your poem these words capture me because these things in themselves happens to man , life is a constant struggles but we have to be strong in the struggles so simple yet so descriptive , this life is just getting ready for the next to come. The writer gives a feeling of sadness notice how personification helps to communicate the writer tone this is the emotions the writer wants his readers to experience you painted a picture words to express your mood, i like it very much. T.C